Constructing your short story and gaining feedback

Reason For Learning

Students will share their ideas with peers and teacher for feedback and suggestions to improve their short story.

Learning Intention

You will share your story with peers and teacher for constructive feedback so that it many be finalised.

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    ACELA1544 Level 8

    Understand the use of punctuation conventions, including colons, semicolons, dashes and brackets in formal and informal texts

    ACELY1736 Level 8

    Create imaginative, informative and persuasive texts that raise issues, report events and advance opinions, using deliberate language and textual choices, and including digital elements as appropriate

    ACELY1808 Level 8

    Use interaction skills for identified purposes, using voice and language conventions to suit different situations, selecting vocabulary, modulating voice and using elements such as music, images and sound for specific effects

    ACELY1810 Level 8

    Experiment with text structures and language features to refine and clarify ideas to improve the effectiveness of students’ own texts