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The following documents are to be used for proof-reading and to provide plenty of student written examples of expository/hybrid paragraphs.
The first document contains our unedited paragraphs, written in class last Friday
The second is a scan of the proof-reading notes made by Chloe
The third contains the edited paragraphs, improved based on our group proof-reading, as well as Chloe's notes.
These three documents will provide good examples of the ways you can strengthen your writing through proof reading, even under SAC or exam conditions, as well as exposing you to lots of different writing styles and examples on this topic. REMEMBER: A little proof-reading and editing goes A LONG LONG way.